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EXERCISE:
Study the following paragraphs so that you can discuss them in class. Be prepared to give the topic sentence
or the central idea of each paragraph and to tell what method (or combination of methods) is used to
develop it, e.g. by:
- many details
- examples
- a story
- incidents
- reasons
- comparisons or
- contrasts
Also point out transitional devices, i.e. connecting words or phrases that show the relationship between
ideas, details, examples of transitional expressions like:
accordingly
after
after that
afterward
also
and
another
as a result
as soon as
at first
at last
at the same time
before long
besides
but
consequently
even
if even so
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finally
first (second, third, etc.)
for example
for instance
for this reason
furthermore
hence
however
in addition
in spite of
instead
in the first (second, etc.) place
in the meantime
later
likewise
meanwhile
moreover
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nevertheless
next
one
once ... now
on the contrary
on the other hand
or
other
otherwise
similarly
soon
that is
then
therefore
to begin with
thus
when
yet
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1
The word ‚gold' has a glamorous sound! It has power, too, enough to lure thousands of hopefuls to Alaska
around the turn of this century, and it meant different things to different people. Some who came wanted
a fortune, overnight, if possible. Some were fleeing the crowded, dirty cities and wanted only untainted
air to breathe and lots of space. Many were running from trouble, real or imagined - family, work, or
money trouble. For some older men it was the last, lone hope of making a "success." A few women,
considered very daring, came too. Idealists, cynics, workers, loafers, adventurers, and writers -
they all poured into the territory. There was plenty of room for them in Alaska.'
2
We went to a country school, which was on our own ranch, where the children of five or six other families
attended. Most of them rode to school horseback. One of our games was "cats and dogs." This, we boys -
for girls did not join in it - played at noon recess. The "cats" would set out in the brush afoot.
About three minutes later the "dogs," mounted on horses and yelling like Apache Indians, would take
after them. The brush had thorns and the idea of the "cat" was to get into brush so thick that the
"dog" could not follow him, or to crawl into a thicket where he could not be seen. Sometimes the chase
would last until long after the bell had sounded. I remember one great chase that kept us out until
three o'clock. An hour later eight or nine boys were alone with the teacher and a pile of switches.'
3
Suppose that you were going to paint a picture of a hillside on a windy day. There are two ways you
might go about it. One would be to paint a blade of grass and then another blade of grass and then
another, until you had put down all the blades of grass you could see, sketched in the rest of the
hillside, and were ready to start on the trees, limb by limb, and then the clouds with a stray butterfly
thrown in for good measure. lf you could do all of this accurately, reproducing exactly the
perspective and color, you would have produced something known as "photographic realism." The other way
of going at this picture would be to paint what you really see when you look at that hillside; that is,
not when you dissect the scene to do a realistic painting of it, but when you look at it for the pure
pleasure of seeing that hillside on a windy day. You don't see the grass blade by blade.'
4
The weather that winter was cold and sunny. We had one five-inch snow that lingered on the ground in
patches for about a week, but little rain or sleet. The schools were bitterly cold, and there were
many absences among the children. Three boys in the class dropped out with tuberculosis. Milk that
winter was available only from the drugstore and on a doctor's prescription, for sick babies, but I
was able to get powdered milk for them. Transportation was hideous. Trains and streetcars were cold,
dirty, and often windowless as well as jammed to the roof. People climbed in through the windows after
the aisles and steps were filled. Cloth of all kinds was so scarce that even the worn green plush
uphotstery had been cut off by passengers and taken home to patch clothes. It was not unusual for
people to have their ribs broken in the crush, and I myself saw a pencil that had been splintered
in a man's breast pocket.
5
The hurricane charged into Connecticut coast lands, gutting seaside resorts, fishing fleets, summer
homes, and industrial areas. Flying limbs and chimney bricks were spat like machine-gun fire through
the air. As far inland as twenty miles, salt spray destroyed vegetation, and salt traces were later
discovered nearly fifty miles from the sea. Winds far over a hundred miles an hour raked the peaceful
New England countryside, uprooting some 275 million trees, destroying or damaging thousands of
buildings, and chopping up thousands of miles of telephone lines.'
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